Good Brian !
An improved version of your previous painting that I saw in Veldhoven
In particular the vert nice expression of the left character , well none !!
Your photograph was a bit overexposed, so here is a darker version.
I also noticed dozens of small white light spots overall on the background and on the painting itself, caused probably by many dust particles, like seen on flats taken during expos. I corrected many of them manually on the picture, but be careful to avoid such contamination on the painting itself, or work in cleaner conditions (perhaps also, clean-up the glass before taking a picture of a framed work).
On the painting, look at some tips to improve the painting of the eyes: the iris should touch more the upper side of the eyes, and nearly not the bottom side, I can look at some guidelines on the webb and send them to you.
Also bring some shadow in the green coat of the pants on the right to give more 3-D effect, perhaps more lights on the left side as you did for the red coats;
Give some shadows in the gloves, hands too and the white hanging pièces wich are on opposite to the light : they are all painted pure bright white, without nuance of grey-blue, destroying a bit the effects you gave on the other colours.
But nice
